Some main improvements that our target audience picked up on was the fact that they didn't like that the black and white filter doesn't run consistently throughout. This is something that my partner and I are going to consider and rectify in our next editing session as we agree that it ruins the continuity and professional look of the scene and gives the opening a more dark and eerie atmosphere overall.
Another improvement that we picked up on was that they didn't like the fact that the music stopped when the scene goes to the back to the bedroom nearing the end as like before, it ruins the continuity of the scene and and doesn't maintain the ominous mood all the way till the end. We will make the music go through on into the bedroom shots as well now in our next editing session.
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